Brix, only just got that draft (didn't even know we had a private notifications box!). It seems spot on to me. Concise and to the point, its the way to go. Go ahead with that I say.
Great work Brixton; if it can reach the right person in HQ it can't fail to impress; makes total sense. Thanks for all the hard work you've put into this. Sorry for delay in feedback, I've been offside for a few days.
