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Discussion in 'Southampton' started by St George, Jul 1, 2013.

  1. St George

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    What I meant to say was I've watched games since '05, but became a regular since 2010!
     
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  2. St George

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    Cheers!
     
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  3. Beddy

    Beddy Plays the percentage

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    Not a bad read.........Fran has given you a very good tip....read it aloud to yourself the mistakes will jump out at you.
    Try not to make sentences too long. Suggest you download a "grammar and spell check" app you may find this will help. Your style is good don't lose it.
    BT
     
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  4. TheSecondStain

    TheSecondStain Needs an early night

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    And don't depend on a spell-checker, St George, to keep you out trouble entirely. Whilst it's relatively unimportant here, on a blog, I would have thought we'd all take a little more care. In the case above, Beddy has the spelling correct, but not at the right time, that is, the context is wrong. ;)

    I would have thought Fran would have advised you to read the text aloud. :)
     
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  5. Beddy

    Beddy Plays the percentage

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    <laugh>.......That will teach me to do things in a rush.....<laugh>........another tip don't be rushed other wise you will miss obvious mistakes similar to mine
     
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  6. saintgreg10

    saintgreg10 Well-Known Member

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    Very good article. Ignore the negative criticism, only listen to those that appear to be offering constructive advice.

    I personally enjoyed it and it's made me wish that Saturday 17th August was upon us already!

    COYS!
     
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  7. lamby

    lamby Needs a cold shower

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    Likewise!
     
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    I don't see any negative criticism, only constructive advice.
     
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  9. St George

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    I agree, I think he was meant in general!
     
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  10. St George

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    Cheers for all your inputs. It may be a good idea to have a sticky thread for others to link their work to perhaps? I found everyone's feedback really helpful and a place to put them for those who like reading this kind of thing could be popular perhaps?
     
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