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Chesterfield 1-3 Hull - Match Report from a Spireite

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  1. ryan147

    ryan147 New Member

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    PLT Well-Known Member

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    Had a quick scan and it reads pretty well to me. Good knowledge of opposition players too.
     
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    Thank you! :)
     
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    Amin Arrears Well-Known Member

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    "Ex-England defender Michael Dawson and Croatia forward Nikica Jelavic"

    "Saunders decide to hand some valuable first team minutes to youngsters"

    Are proof reading and accuracy no longer requirements among journalists, or only those commenting on Chestefield?

    Not only wrong information included in both match report I've seen but also poor grammer to accompany.
     
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    Dr.Stanley O'Google, HCFC Well-Known Member

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    It reads well. Good stuff.
     
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  6. ryan147

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    Thank you for pointing out the second one, I have edited the error. However, what is incorrect about the first?
     
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    Thank you very much :)
     
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  8. Dr.Stanley O'Google, HCFC

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    Careful, kid - you're getting involved with Bob...
     
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    Yeah a good read, however one more sp. 'This evening fixture'.
     
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    I'd maybe have not mentioned that HM was a former Sheff U player twice (I'd be happy without seeing their ****ty name at all but needs must) apart from that it reads OK.
     
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    He probably means it should be "ex-Croatia forward" or "Croatian forward."
     
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    Psst..."grammar"
     
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  13. The FRENCH TICKLER

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    Reads well and a good report. As i was not able to make the game last night.

    A good 3-1 win for the Tigers. On to Austria now.
     
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    I'd be careful about taking too much advice from a guy who can't spell grammar.
     
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    Ha, you ****ing ******.
     
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    Decent report, good to see us referred to as Hull City! Ignore anything Hat says, he can't spell Chesterfield, or grammar, he's not sure if he's seen 1 match report or 2 and that infinitive at the end is definitely dodgy!
     
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  17. Amin Arrears

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    please log in to view this image
     
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  18. Steve.R

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    Thanks for posting Ryan, it was a very good read from start to finish.
     
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    Agreed.
     
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  20. Happy Tiger

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    Nicely written piece there fella.
     
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