Totally Hull City's new website, http://totallyhcafc.co.uk Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, Thanks in advanced
Like everything apart from the name... Sorry that isn't meant to be a kick in the bollocks just doesn't quite work for me.
looks good.make sure you get your spelling correct or you will get that Portugese chap leaving you school teacher like posts.have you tried to break it?what happens if we all hit it at the same time.like when the Chelsea tickets go on sale.
Good site, but whoever writes the articles desperately needs to learn some grammar. For example: Birmingham City fans are outraged after recently hearing the proposed transfer fee in which the club have accepted off Hull City. The well speculated £2.25 million bid from Hull City has been accepted by cash strapped Blues. Should be; Birmingham City fans are outraged after recently hearing the proposed transfer fee accepted by the club from Hull City. The well speculated £2.25 million bid from Hull City has been accepted by the cash strapped Blues. Blues fans think âHull City are taking Blues to the cleanersâ as former Birmingham City boss, and now Hull City boss Steve Bruce looks to pounce for his man. Curtis Davies, Birminghamâs player of the season is named Birminghamâs most prized asset, is keen to return to the Premier League. Should be; Blues fans think âHull City are taking the club to the cleaners as former Birmingham City (and now Hull City) boss Steve Bruce looks to pounce for his man. Player of the season Davies is Birminghamâs most prized asset, but now he is said to be keen to return to the Premier League. Davies is thought to be heading to the KC Stadium on Monday to finalise contract talks and tie up a 3 year deal with the club. Birmingham City boss Lee Clark had declared interest in Jack Hobbs, and was hoping to get him as part of the Davies deal, however, it now seems since promotion to the Premier League, Hobbsâ contract generated increases and appear to be a stumbling block in Birminghamâs attempts to sign former Liverpool man. Should be; The defender is thought to be heading to the KC Stadium on Monday to finalise contract talks and tie up a 3 year deal with the club. Birmingham City boss Lee Clark has meanwhile declared an interest in Jack Hobbs. He was hoping to sign the player as part of the Davies deal, however, it now seems Hobbs' wages have increased since promotion to the Premier League and this appears to be the stumbling block in Birminghamâs attempts to sign the former Liverpool man. It's great that the OP has put together a good Hull City site, but he's letting down the quality with poor grammar.
Thanks for the good feedback, and the bad. Will continue to try and improve. Anything you think I should add to it?
I feel that I should probably explain my sudden disappearance from the previous domain (hull-city-afc.co.uk). I was happy to write for the site but I joined as a sort of freelance contributor, posting only when I had the time. Suddenly I ended up being the sole contributor and you then said work had piled up and handed me the site's Twitter account, so I was essentially left in charge. It was rather a lot more than I was expecting to take on (Edit) No idea why I posted this here and not as a PM. I'm off the ball today
