Newgod's big mental thread of love

Yo droppin bombs dog, you are MC battling newgod and he knows about eminem and that so he is obviously good at it.

 

It paints a picture in your head Beale of a hellish slum, moving to say the least

 

well that makes anal avacado a old granny pig sh.it eater,
anyways what he did was his filthy a.ss problem and he is free to go fu.ck bill from kill bill

 

well your rap moses was not really very well quality sh.it you know, and also that this was supposed to be a Dis rap but i did not felt any Dis or any emotion to be honest,
but anyways keepit up write some more, I always encourage people tobe creative,

 

nope he is not even into the competition with Exceela or Skaya
i have 20 albums pignik he has just started to rhyme as in kindergarden

 

i think it sounds cool, it does say a lot of troubled neighbourhood, gang life, street life and all,
i think it good,
the intensity was good, the flow was good too, the description was near to real, i can feel the words they run deep, negative emotions come out really clear and nicely inthis lines
i would love to hear the complete song if you can work on it making some time

also get a title for the track that would be nice

 

well another gangsta rap, not critising but the emotions are not very touchy, general things you can hear in all gangsta raps guns drugs women sex and all
the track lacks strong emotions negative or positive well there is never much positive emotion in a gangsta rap but still it does not means that it cannot be
when you sing about general things the impact of those things are also very simple, when you use strong emotions in your songs and if people can relate to that it works better

so you need to work on your intensity, put some strong emotions it does not matter if it sounds stupid or out of normal
your flow looks okay for me, you can get it better though, for starter try to write a rap about you life all the good things all the bad things, it does not matters if that song does not comes up as a really good one, when you write it he first time dont make it final, keep on it, you will figure for yourself that you can write the same thing in a different perhaps better way, do that and post it here

Everyone thinks writing a rap song is very easy and that it takes almost no skill to sing rap but whenever anyone tells me that i reply them as if its so easy write and sing a rap song to me
when they do that for themselves they figure how hard it can be,

so keep up and you will get better

i use lines like "the whole world wants me dead", "Clearly over 7 billion people in the world clearly Hate me" obviously it was just that i have many haters and they are hardcore, i intensified the emotion with those words, use things like these in your songs, they work out

 

Newgod - sorry I should have included the title, it's 'Went South'

 

okay nice as went south as if Going Down,, Going Down would have been a nice title too
BTW do have any experience regarding such places you menionted in your lines or was it just out of creativity of imagination

 

Well the place I grew up in when I was just starting out was like that, I managed to get myself out and now live in a better neighbourhood.

The line 'now i'm queueing up to glug green medicine' is referring to the methodone programme I was on that helped me beat my drug addiction

 

interesting, its good that you have come out of the places and the things that can destroy you
i have come across some addicts myself, although i never had or have any addiction,
although my childhood was very great with loving parents and all
i am the only child in the family so obviously i was well taken care of
i always wanted a little sister
i have made up an imaginary little sister for my raps named Emily i have named her in some of my songs
the things she would say and the things she would do and all

 

excellent stuff, do you take a lot of influence from eminem and his references to his daughter?

 

whats the rat sh.it eating rascal TOby doing here at this time

Well commander Time Check
its 9:21 according to Indian Time, the date is 22 of Jan 2014, its a boring Wednesday and toby the little rascal is sh.iting here on my thread

 

i love eminem
i like his stlye i dont copy him but i like the intensity he uses, his lyrics and his way of singing is very emotionally strong, when he says something it sounds like he means it although may not really

eninem's daughter is real, he uses his alter egos named shady and all for various purposes,
i put imaginary situation people and incident
one rap that i have posted here named You dont know me, have some reference of my ex girl named nina
she is not real i have never been to a house by the shore and all
but i made that all up to create a hurt in love emotion, it has dates and behaviour refs like as i was leaving from her house by the shore she was still standing by the door and all
it makes it sounds more real when its not
also my mom asking me where is nina and all
i use that, since my normal life does have not incidents like these which i want to write raps on i make things up

 

I generally enjoy abusing *****s but you take it too far

I don't laugh at people with serious mental disabilities

 

oh so you mean to say that you dont laugh at yourself coz you have serious mental disabilities
oh thats okay if you come across new york sometime docheck in with my mental hospital
we can really either fix people or just make them disappear thats like our speciality

 

i know his daughter is real, I was just wondering if you made up Emily seeing as you don't have a daughter (that I know of)

I considered making up an uncle who killed himself over some bitch that didnt want him, not so much to rap about, but just as a sort of tribute to eminem.

'simplify the rhyme just to amplify the noise'

 

They give you Wifi access

 

i am not married yet
emily is a imaginary sister , the one i never had,
i prefer to stick to simple words rather than using slangs and complex words,
if emotions can be expressed they can be expressed using simple words too

BTW if you have any more work post themhere

 

no its my hospital, my father owns the joint and i work there as a Psychiatrist
you are welcome there i will give you 2 dollar consession, and a free brain shock session
make that 3